TOPIC: DESCRIBE AN EVENT

Describe an event that changed you in a positive way.

1. MỞ ĐẦU

I’m going to talk about an event which has brought a positive change into my life.

2. THÔNG TIN CƠ BẢN

Eg. I can’t remember exactly the date the workshop took place, but it was held in a large meeting room of a big hotel right in the city center. 
Back in September 2015 when I was struggling to find a better way to manage my money. I suddenly saw an advert on the Internet about a workshop on how to manage personal finances more effectively, which was exactly what I was looking for. I clicked the link and registered without any hesitation. It cost me around $50 for the horse, but it was absolutely worth it.

3. PHẦN CỐT LÕI

4. PHẦN CẢM NHẬN

Eg. I knew more about why I always struggled financially even though I earned quite a good salary. I learned more about how to track my daily spending more wisely and how much I needed to set aside as soon as I got my paycheck. I still apply those methods I learned from that workshop into my daily life, and I feel that I’m becoming much better at money management than I was before. I make more careful decisions when it comes to shopping, especially shopping for clothes and beauty products. I save at least 10% of my total income every month, and I set aside a certain amount for emergencies or unexpected events.

5. PHẦN KẾT

So if I had to talk about an event that had changed me in a positive way, it would have to be this workshop.

SAMPLE

I’m going to talk about an event which has brought a positive change into my life.

I can’t remember exactly the date the workshop took place, but it was held in a large meeting room of a big hotel right in the city center.

Back in September 2015 when I was struggling to find a better way to manage my money. I suddenly saw an advert on the Internet about a workshop on how to manage personal finances more effectively, which was exactly what I was looking for. I clicked the link and registered without any hesitation. It cost me around $50 for the horse, but it was absolutely worth it.

I got up quite early that day because I was so excited about the workshop. After breakfast, I went to the bus station near my flat and it took me nearly an hour to get there.

There were two speakers who had lots of experience with financial management. I remember the first speaker talked about the factors leading to financial stress, credit card debts and other money-related issues that we were dealing with, while the second one showed us the most effective ways to tackle those problems. I learned a great deaI from them.

I knew more about why I always struggled financially even though I earned quite a good salary. I learned more about how to track my daily spending more wisely and how much I needed to set aside as soon as I got my paycheck. I still apply those methods I learned from that workshop into my daily life, and I feel that I’m becoming much better at money management than I was before. I make more careful decisions when it comes to shopping, especially shopping for clothes and beauty products. I save at least 10% of my total income every month, and I set aside a certain amount for emergencies or unexpected events.

So if I had to talk about an event that had changed me in a positive way, it would have to be this workshop.